My headline makes no sense. You know why? It's about my stubborn characters - they're kissing in the kitchen and I can't get them out of there.
Trust me, I've tried. I've rewritten the start of this scene three - THREE!!! - times. This thing was just a flowin' too. It's a Christmas story, I've had so much fun writing it...until now.
Though this isn't a kitchen, it is a public place and this couple can't be having, ahem, carnal knowledge of each other in public. Well, they could but they'd get in big trouble.
I want my couple to have carnal knowledge of each other - and I don't want them to do it in the kitchen. It's not their style. They need to be in a bed, like this:
I think I need to rewrite the scene again and have it start somewhere else - not in the kitchen. Sigh...
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